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Monday, October 17, 2011

Image as Effective Cliff Hanger in A Game of Thrones: Includes Spoilers

After reading chapter after chapter of convoluted, complex, and largely compelling story telling, trading off point of view characters throughout the volumes, it is image that creates the most effective cliff hangers in A Storm of Swords, the third volume in the series starting with A Game of Thrones (A Song of Ice and Fire), by George R. R. Martin. Toward the end of Volume 3, here’s a spoiler or two, if you’ve been reading the series: Jon Snow, voted Commander of the Night’s Watch, his direwolf, Ghost, by his side, and Mormont’s black raven on his shoulder, dressed in his blacks with his brown hair flowing. Lady Catelyn with the specter of her ravaged face and her long finger pointing.

There is so much happening in this series, from multiple, multiple points of view, usually major characters, but sometimes tertiary, the reader could get lost, if it were not for memorable image keeping the central characters and themes alive. Name after name is dropped and largely forgotten, but characters remain. You find yourself looking forward to certain ones and the continuation of their plights. One character for me I find particularly boring, and I like to skip past her, Daenerys, mother of dragons- but if I do, I always force myself to go back, and re-read any parts that I’ve missed. If I’m going to bother with this heavy tome, I’m in for the duration, no matter how tedious or exalting.

George R. R. Martin is a master story teller and world builder, but the series, so far, would benefit from judicious editing and a lighter hand when it comes to depravity. Sometimes, it seems to me as the reader, the author is enjoying too much his depiction of rape, incest, and torture, sensationalizing rather than chronicling what is necessary to the story he is telling. On the other hand, characters such as Jaime Lannister, or Sandor Clegane (Joffrey’s dog), who at first appear to be monsters, become fully dimensional and worthy of deliberation.

I’m getting tired, however, of the “chess effect,” though I suppose that’s the design from the beginning. I haven’t read any reviews that discuss the entire series, so not to be influenced, so I cannot be sure, whether my final assessment will be favorable or whether I will be disappointed. I don’t like it when favorite characters get killed off, or good characters go bad!

It is the children I hope for the most, and Martins’s children are both complex and vulnerable, as individual in their personalities, strengths and desires, as any adult character. With its extreme violence and graphic sexual situations, it cannot be said this series would be age appropriate for any teen; but the children and teens in this fantasy civilization are the hope of its survival.

Who do I like the most? Arya, of course, though I fear she has lost herself, and may never recover true strength. Sansa, if only she can find herself. Jon, always Jon. And Bran. And Rickon. And the girl and boy, Meera and Jojen, who travel with Bran. Davos Seaworthy is my favorite adult character. There are plenty of adult characters to hate, and a few young ones, too. I liked Tyrion, for a time, and Bronn has his appeal as a character, but not as a human being.

If you’ve read any part of the series, what are your thoughts?

If you read fantasy fiction, what are your reasons?

Who are your favorite fantasy authors?

Saturday, October 8, 2011

Sounds Like A Poem

In response to a post titled, Autumnal Winds, from Thom Buchanan, and a series of art and poetry pages he published at The Pictorial Arts, I wrote this sort of a poem, and since I've had a dearth of poetry lately, I will post it here, as a sort of reminder, that I can at least attempt to write a poem.

Contributing, also, was a recent walk on the ridge near where I live, where falls of vines skirted the oak trees, and huge webs with dangling spiders, strung between branches from tree to tree.

Here it is, not totally awful, but not good, starting from first draft as a post comment, to the "final" version (there were several quick drafts between point a and point b):

I love Fall, too, though it's hard to "see" it, where I live. Mostly tropical foliage, but the oak trees do shed leaves. Mostly, we experience it as a drop in temperature of about ten degrees, and a bit more breeze. Pumpkins, scarecrows, and costumes come out at Halloween.


Sounds Like a Poem

Amidst tropical
foliage, and broad
leafed green, a
temperature drop
of about ten degrees,

I love Fall, though
it’s hard to see-

Oak trees lace
with spider weaves,
reluctant to shed
their leaves.

Pumpkins, scarecrows,
and costumes come out
to play at Halloween.

© 2011 Annie King